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Or Die Alone – Editing Update

All existing content has been edited, and I’m much happier with the flow of Chapter 12. I’m now adding in the action scene I mentioned, which shouldn’t take more than a couple of days, then that should be it!
If you’d like to follow it, the new content starts at ‘Korza lifted his head’

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Or Die Alone – Editing Update

I feel like I’m getting a pretty good handle on this now. I made a bunch more changes and tweaks, and there’s only about 4000 words of existing content left to edit. We lost a couple of small action scenes in the shuffle so I may try to add a little more of that back in.

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Or Die Alone Cover WIP

Our patron of the Polar arts Oouna has returned to us once again with a WIP of the upcoming cover for Or Die Alone, in what they’ve referred to as a Polar explosion. Progress is coming along really quickly on this one, and I’m loving how it’s shaping up. It features Lorza shortly following her squid binge, and the unfortunate Agent Boyd, who is being sheltered from the cold in the warmth of her bosom entirely against his will. We’re also getting a nude version of this one, which I’m sure you will look forward to.

If you’d like to see more of Oouna’s work, you can find it over here:
https://www.oouna.com/
https://www.furaffinity.net/user/oouna/

Or Die Alone – Editing Update

Another 6000 words today. I’ve slowed down a little bit because I’ve identified some issues with Chapter 12 that I feel require some small rewrites. In reintroducing Boyd and Lorza to the climax of the story (where they were strangely absent in the original) I inadvertently made Captain Stavros appear less competent by having them make too many suggestions and steer the conflict in his place.
I’m changing some of their interactions to address that imbalance and to make their input more appropriate to their areas of expertise.
I also feel that the objectives of the invasion were somewhat unclear, so I’m switching the focus away from the number of missiles fired to revolve more around taking control of the tether.

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