Brokering Trust – Update

2000 word update, new content at ‘Are you really going to have a panic attack’

The initial dinner scene in the apartment was a bit of a lore dump, so I moved the section about the Broker government and how it functions to later in the story to improve the pacing, and I replaced it with a short conversation about housing. If you see that part repeating in this update, you’re not crazy, and if you’d like to read the new section that was added in, you can go to “Not bad at all,”

Brokering Trust